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Totally Subtle Recline

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Oh, no no Selithia, there's nothing at all obvious going on here.  Oh, were you flaunting something?  Goodness, I had no idea.

Alright, new mabinogi outfits came out so of course Sel's gotta squeeze into them.   Also rocking her new anime-mom hair which frankly is pretty cute on her.  

Mostly, I fell out of practice and needed to relearn how to draw AGAIN.  This happens every few months, what the hell.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Alright, this is my first attempt at a critique so don't blame me if it's not as good as others.

Alright, very interesting submission you have here. The most striking thing you first notice is the clothes, has this interesting frontal corset looking piece that kinda lends to original and exotic looking clothing; combined with the very... provocative angle I think it makes it very sexy looking.

I also like some of the other features in the clothing, such as the low cut top with no shoulder straps, and the showing thigh between the long stockings and the torso piece. Again, serves to make the image more sexy and adds a nice amount of detail to her outfit as well.

On more general notes, the detail is very good (particularly on the clothes), the linage is great and reinforces the detail as well as showing us the angles of her pose. The shade and lighting is also a nice touch, but isn't particularly striking.

Evaluating the model, her curves are nice and round and she seems to have good proportional balance; however given the angle her chest is a bit obscured to us but is probably necessary to make the perspective more unique.

I've also noticed that a lot of your models have a very similar looking face and often feature green hair. This is good for helping unfamiliar viewers to identify your works, but I would likely try to make a consistent character with green hair and then experiment with other looks for other new and interesting characters.

Overall I'd say this submission is quite good, it's not the best I've ever seen, but it is certainly far above average.

Anyway, good luck and great work on this.