Sad Rika in an Iron Door

Well I must say, the background doesn't look nearly as sketchy as some of your previous deviations. good job on that! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up" /> The color choice was well done, as is the lightening in the background. This gave the picture a good "3D" look. The wires going off screen and then coming back helped with this a lot. Fabulous job on the perspective.

While I may not know the full extent of the story behind this particular character, I can see that you are very consistent in the way you draw her.

Her armor looks good, well as much as plain black armor type clothing can. There is not a lot to critique on there. Its plain. Her chest piece is much the same, save for the small heart on it.

Excellent job on her eyes, you gave them a good sense of longing. (Or is it fear?) for the computer being dead that raised her.

All in all, a giant leap forwards in your skill. I applaud you sir. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap" />

4 and 1/2 stars for vision because it seems you pulled off the vision you were going for very well.

4 stars for originality.

4 and 1/2 stars for technique! Cause you can always do a little bit better!

4 stars for impact. This picture is a good one for the Phantasy star 4 folks. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />